商务英语考试

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试题答案： 答案解析：{{B}}Sample A{{/B}} The development of the turnover of FROZEN FOOD Ltd. The following report describes the changes in turnover by type of retail sector over the three years periods 2000 to 2002. In all three years the turnover made by supermarkets was the highest of all three retail outlets. Department stores remained the second greatest before small shops-outlets. The turnover reached by supermarkets increased steadily over the three years and was ￡80m in 2002. The turnover of department stores was￡50m in 2000 but fell to ￡35m in 2001. In 2002 it remained steady to the previous year. After a loss in 2001, the small shops-outlets reached again a higher level but could not reach the ￡30m turnover of 2000. {{B}}Band 3{{/B}} All the content points are included and, despite minor grammatical errors and several lexical errors, there is reasonable control overall. It is a well-organised answer with an adequate range of language and fits the descriptors for band 3. {{B}}Sample B{{/B}} Below is a report on the changes in turnover for three kinds of retail outlet, owned by one company, over a three-year period. The overall highest turnover of eighty million pounds was obtained by supermarkets in 2002. On the other hand, the smallest turnover was made in small shops in 2001. Over the year 2000, a turnover of fifty million pounds was reached in department stores, whereas it then plumetted to about thirty-five million pounds in 2001 and maintained this position throughout 2002. The supermarkets turnover rose steadily from 2000, reaching its peak in 2002 with eighty million pounds. Clearly, small shops had the smallest turnover altogether. Thirty million pounds in 2000, a noticeable drop to twenty million in 2001 and a slight increase of five million in 2002. In conclusion, the highest results were achieved by supermarkets, followed by department stores and then small shops. {{B}}Band 4{{/B}} This answer shows an accurate and natural use of language with a good range of structures and vocabulary. The slightly awkward organisation and the minor omission of a starting point for supermarkets prevent it from being a band 5. document.getElementById("warp").style.display="none"; document.getElementById("content").style.display="block"; 查看试题解析出处>>