【分析解答题】Write a composition of 200 words on the following topic :
What Would You Like toDo after Graduation
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part state what you think is the best way.
In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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试题答案：[参考范文] Nowadays it seems more and more difficult for college students to find a satisfactory job，since millions of college graduates pour into the tight job market every year．As a result，many of them have to do jobs irrelevant to their specialties．So an increasing number of graduates prefer to continue their studies in school after graduation． There are several other reasons for this consideration．Firstly．at present the general economy presents a gloomy picture. The increase of job opportunities cannot meet the increasing number of college graduates．Hence，the competition in job hunting is becoming more fierce。Secondly， as the information age approaches ，automation has made it possible for less hands to finish the same job than before．Mean while， more and more update knowledge and skills are required for us to gear to the development of technology ，and the best way is to sharpen our edges in school．Finally，higher academic degrees always mean higher income for employees．So it is also valuable investment to further our study． Therefore，as far as I am concerned，I am going to continue my postgraduate study in school， just as the old Chinese saying goes：Sharpen the edge of your axe before chopping down the tree． 答案解析：[亮点回放] 用词亮点 (1)the general economy presents a gloomy picture：当前经济形势不景气。 (2)as sth．approaches：随着某物的到来。 句式亮点 (1)被动语态的运用，如：More and more knowledge is required for US to gear to the development of technology。 (2)谚语的引用，如：just as the old Chinese saying goes：sharpen the edge of your axe before chopping down the tree。 篇章亮点 (1)文章开头便开门见山地说明了本文论述的主题．增强了文章的可信度； (2)文章主次分明，重点突出，主体段着力分析了产生现状的原因，层次清晰。 [谋篇布局] 1．第一部分概括说明在大学生中普遍出现了愿意推迟就业的倾向性。 2．第二部分着重分析了这种现象产生的几种原因。 3．第三部分阐明了作者自己的观点，即愿意继续学业。 document.getElementById("warp").style.display="none"; document.getElementById("content").style.display="block"; 查看试题解析出处>>
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part state what you think is the best way.
In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
网考网解析：
试题答案：[参考范文] Nowadays it seems more and more difficult for college students to find a satisfactory job，since millions of college graduates pour into the tight job market every year．As a result，many of them have to do jobs irrelevant to their specialties．So an increasing number of graduates prefer to continue their studies in school after graduation． There are several other reasons for this consideration．Firstly．at present the general economy presents a gloomy picture. The increase of job opportunities cannot meet the increasing number of college graduates．Hence，the competition in job hunting is becoming more fierce。Secondly， as the information age approaches ，automation has made it possible for less hands to finish the same job than before．Mean while， more and more update knowledge and skills are required for us to gear to the development of technology ，and the best way is to sharpen our edges in school．Finally，higher academic degrees always mean higher income for employees．So it is also valuable investment to further our study． Therefore，as far as I am concerned，I am going to continue my postgraduate study in school， just as the old Chinese saying goes：Sharpen the edge of your axe before chopping down the tree． 答案解析：[亮点回放] 用词亮点 (1)the general economy presents a gloomy picture：当前经济形势不景气。 (2)as sth．approaches：随着某物的到来。 句式亮点 (1)被动语态的运用，如：More and more knowledge is required for US to gear to the development of technology。 (2)谚语的引用，如：just as the old Chinese saying goes：sharpen the edge of your axe before chopping down the tree。 篇章亮点 (1)文章开头便开门见山地说明了本文论述的主题．增强了文章的可信度； (2)文章主次分明，重点突出，主体段着力分析了产生现状的原因，层次清晰。 [谋篇布局] 1．第一部分概括说明在大学生中普遍出现了愿意推迟就业的倾向性。 2．第二部分着重分析了这种现象产生的几种原因。 3．第三部分阐明了作者自己的观点，即愿意继续学业。 document.getElementById("warp").style.display="none"; document.getElementById("content").style.display="block"; 查看试题解析出处>>
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