商务英语考试

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试题答案: 答案解析:{{B}}Sample A{{/B}} Performance Report 2001-2003 Introduction The aim of this report is to describe the company’s performance in the years 2001-2003. 2001 In 2001 the company’s turnover was at its peak and the operating profit reached the 500 million dollar mark. They sold 10 million units what was the reason for this excellent result. 2002 In the following year, the company had to handle a decrease in operating profits of 20% as well as a decline of their turnover, which was a result of less units which were sold. 2003 In 2003, the company was able to sell more units again, so they could increase their turnover but their operating profits still went down, because they had to pay the last year’s failure. Conclusion The company’s performance was great in 2001 and 2003, just in 2002 they had little problems because of a decrease of their units sold. The company won’t have problems in the future. {{B}}Band 3{{/B}} This is a reasonable achievement of the task and it is well organised. However, the language range is limited and there are a number of errors. {{B}}Sample B{{/B}} From the bar chart on the last page we could see some statics that show the operating condition of a company in the last three years 2001-2003. In the year 2001, they got the highest operating profit up to 500 million US dollar. There is a decline trend of operating profit, the company made 350 million US dollar of 2003, the lowest profit of the 3 years. Turn to the company’s turnover. It rebounded to 6200 million US dollar after a little decrease in 2002. The company’s turnover reached it’s highest record both in 2001 and 2003. In the year of 2003, the company got the most unit sales up to 11 million, it is 2 million more than 2002’s, and the record is 1.1 times of they made in 2001. Though the company made the highest record of turnover and unit sales in 2003, they lost in draw back the decline trend of operating profit. {{B}}Band 2{{/B}} This answer covers all the content points and the organisation is sound, but it lacks internal cohesion. Grammatical structures are limited and errors are numerous and sometimes obscure communication. document.getElementById("warp").style.display="none"; document.getElementById("content").style.display="block"; 查看试题解析出处>>

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